The grave’s darkness
It was a stormy night at home. Alannah and I were making slime. A portal appeared in the room and we thought it was a magical adventure. We jumped in and didn’t know what was going to happen. So we shouted “ HELP” as loud as an engine. All of a sudden we were in someone’s grave and it was dark and misty. We saw it’s bones. The crimson blood was everywhere! I was so terrified. The bones creeped towards me and I shivered frantically. We found the portal and jumped in. The trip was crazy awesome. Still, were totally scared!
Nicky
Hi Nickie,
Great story, very exciting! I like your use of the simile “as loud as an engine”. The undead creature you described sounded very creepy. Well done. Keep up the good work.
Michael (Team 100wc), Warwick, UK
Hi Michael,
Thank you for commenting on my work, I have been learning about similes. I have enjoyed learning about similes.
Thank you so much!!!!